YAAAY this one is my Thank-You-For-300-Watchers-Pic!!
..and it is for all the people who watched me due to the Warriors stuff I do! I hope you like it!
From left to right: Lionblaze(m), Jayfeather(m), Hollyleaf(f)
I know the title isn't quite correct, but I wanted to name it like thiiiiis! xD (people who read the 3rd series will know what I mean)
Tried to consider their characteristics as good as I can o.o Lionblaze is strong and a little bulky (that's how I imagine him), Jayfeather is smart and skinny and Hollyleaf is plushy and sweet ^^ I know the poses are not very inventive °xD and the colours aren'r very realistic, but who cares, its Warrior Cats <.<°
...and... and I... drew a background!! D8 Yep.. a simple.. boring... forest.. background... well at least it was a little fun <.<°
First time I request critique x///x
< EDIT >: Thanks to Slipping-Star I now know that blind born cats don't have grey pupils... Jayfeather should have quite normal black pupils. Those grey pupils result from a disease called cataracts.</ EDIT >
Oh, yes! Very good! I love how you drew this! I especially love how you did the detail in the shading and fur. An d those eyes! I especially love how you did Jayfeather's eyes with that misty affect in his pupil. Now to take a look at Lionblaze. Mmm, yes, I love how you blurred in his tabby stripes, and the fur on his chest too! Although, his arms look a little thick, and his shoulder seem a little bit high. Now, Hollyleaf. I love how you gave her a little smile. It makes her look cuter. But the thing that really caught my attention was the fact that I can't really see her front legs. But other than that, very good!
Wow. This artwork is fantastic!!! Jayfeather, in my opinion, is the best looking in this picture. I haven't yet found a Jayfeather who's eyes look so realistically blind. All the eyes, however look absolutely phenomenal. They look extremely realistic! great job! A few other things to look out for: on Jayfeather's and Hollyleaf's ears, i would watch out that you don't make the insides so big. The back needs to be somewhat visible. If this is confusing, look at how you drew Lionblaze's ears. You can see a little bit of the back of the ear showing. This makes the ear look more 3-dimensional. Lionblaze seems to have abnormally large shoulders. Maybe you were trying a "buff" or "older" look? I think if you wanted more of that style, i would go with adding more muscle. Also, be sure that you can identify a neck on the cat and it's not completely covered with fur. Speaking of fur, the patterns are beautiful and beautifully blended. you can make out the stripes and such but they are not excessively hard-lined (that just means that they are blended). I also like the expressions. Lionblaze still has the playful look i imagine him to have when he was a kit, Hollyleaf looks caring, but i think that Jayfeather's expression should be more..."knowing." I see him as being wiser than his siblings. But that's just me. You imagine however you want. If i critiqued any personal style that you created i'm very sorry. styled or not, this is one absolutely genius piece!!! I hope this helps :3
I luv it The detail give power to it,and I love your style & how realistic ^^ The only thing that's incorrect about it is Jayfeather's eye are actually clear But other than its AMAZING <3
I am just going to say what I like about them. Lionblaze: I love how his mussels are broad and he looks awesome, he deserves to be like that! Jayfeather: I like how you did his BLIND eyes, I saw some art that the people just put normal blue eyes! GOSH! And Hollyleaf: well all I got to say about her is that she is so cute! I love her bright green eyes and the small pink nose! Good job and keep up the hard work
thank you very much! :3 oh Jay's eyes are actually really blue with a black pupil. These grey eyes come from a desease that's called cataracts. But Jay was born blind, he doesn't have cataracts, so his eyes should look really normal. The only thing that's different with his eyes is that they gaze around randomly and don't watch any fixed points like other cats eyes or prey or whatever ^^
I especially love how you did the detail in the shading and fur. An d those eyes! I especially love how you did Jayfeather's eyes with that misty affect in his pupil.
Now to take a look at Lionblaze.
Mmm, yes, I love how you blurred in his tabby stripes, and the fur on his chest too! Although, his arms look a little thick, and his shoulder seem a little bit high.
Now, Hollyleaf. I love how you gave her a little smile. It makes her look cuter. But the thing that really caught my attention was the fact that I can't really see her front legs. But other than that, very good!
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