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The Power of Three by aThousandPaws The Power of Three by aThousandPaws
:iconlaravyplz:YAAAY this one is my Thank-You-For-300-Watchers-Pic!! :iconlaravyplz:

..and it is for all the people who watched me due to the Warriors stuff I do! I hope you like it!

From left to right: Lionblaze(m), Jayfeather(m), Hollyleaf(f)

I know the title isn't quite correct, but I wanted to name it like thiiiiis! xD (people who read the 3rd series will know what I mean)

Tried to consider their characteristics as good as I can o.o Lionblaze is strong and a little bulky (that's how I imagine him), Jayfeather is smart and skinny and Hollyleaf is plushy and sweet ^^
I know the poses are not very inventive xD and the colours aren'r very realistic, but who cares, its Warrior Cats <.<

...and... and I... drew a background!! D8
Yep.. a simple.. boring... forest.. background... well at least it was a little fun <.<

First time I request critique x///x

< EDIT >: Thanks to Slipping-Star I now know that blind born cats don't have grey pupils... Jayfeather should have quite normal black pupils. Those grey pupils result from a disease called cataracts.</ EDIT >
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First of all, this is amazing because that's pretty much exactly how I picture all of them, so way to go there! now for the actual critiquing. I'm going to start with Lionblaze: the fur and anatomy are all astounding, so I;m just going to say that I love how you did the fur on his chest! It looks very much like fur! Secondly, the way you do your eyes!! It's amazing! Would you care to do a tutorial on that? Because for some reason I can never get the eyes to be that perfect. Now on to Jayfeather: the anatomy, colors, fur, everything is great. I love the way you did his tabby stripes - there subtle, but still noticable. Hollyleaf: I really like her nose for some reason...it's just so cool hahaha! The way you managed to do the shine on her eyes is fantastic! So all in all, you did a fantastic job making this picture, the picture is very clear and nice to look at, and the cats don't have any hair (I hate when people put hair on their cats, so thank you for not doing that!) and the depiction of the characters is very accurate! The only thing I would say is that they look quite young (like apprentices)...but perhaps you drew it that way on purpose? I have one parting question before I end this critique - Do you use a tablet or mouse pad?
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Wow. This artwork is fantastic!!! :D Jayfeather, in my opinion, is the best looking in this picture. I haven't yet found a Jayfeather who's eyes look so realistically blind. All the eyes, however look absolutely phenomenal. They look extremely realistic! great job! A few other things to look out for: on Jayfeather's and Hollyleaf's ears, i would watch out that you don't make the insides so big. The back needs to be somewhat visible. If this is confusing, look at how you drew Lionblaze's ears. You can see a little bit of the back of the ear showing. This makes the ear look more 3-dimensional. Lionblaze seems to have abnormally large shoulders. Maybe you were trying a "buff" or "older" look? I think if you wanted more of that style, i would go with adding more muscle. Also, be sure that you can identify a neck on the cat and it's not completely covered with fur. Speaking of fur, the patterns are beautiful and beautifully blended. you can make out the stripes and such but they are not excessively hard-lined (that just means that they are blended). I also like the expressions. Lionblaze still has the playful look i imagine him to have when he was a kit, Hollyleaf looks caring, but i think that Jayfeather's expression should be more..."knowing." I see him as being wiser than his siblings. But that's just me. You imagine however you want. If i critiqued any personal style that you created i'm very sorry. styled or not, this is one absolutely genius piece!!! :) I hope this helps :3
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MoHowl Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome family portrait :)
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Moostawsome Feb 6, 2014  New member
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL:awesome: 
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WinterHuntress Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your drawings! They are magnifique! This is me trying to do art on a computer (the equivalence anyway) artist's block 
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Favourite warrior cats fanart so far
Great job
Love the expressions!
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Nychata Sep 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh gosh Jayfeather looks kinda creepy O.O
But really nice pic! I really do like it. (ouch, was this correct grammer?)
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StormHollie Sep 16, 2013  Student Filmographer
That face Jayfeather has, I bet he's like "What are staring at?"
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Nebelsee Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really cool i love hollyleaf the bestXD
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aThousandPaws Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you <3 ^.^
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