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Submitted: October 5, 2012
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Pack, pack... Kill, kill...by *aThousandPaws

Fan Art / Digital Art / Drawings / Books & Novels

"Pack, pack... Kill, kill..." the young injured she-cat muttered absently.
"Brightpaw! Come back to me!" Cloudtail begged worriedly, "You are still beautiful!!"
[no quote from the book]

This is my favorite Warrior Cats scene from all books I have read.

Hlysht this took me two weeks or something =_0
I really don't remember the accurate scene, this is just how it's etched in my mind. Artistic freedom!

Warrior Cats "Brightpaw/Lostface" and "Cloudtail" by Erin Hunter, art by me.

~Owlflight29 wrote a little scene text for my drawing!

_{"Lostface"
a little white and orange cat turned her head to face the speaker. Muttering a solemn whine. "pack pack, kill kill"
Cloudtail cringed and started to walk over to the she-cat. Trying to thing of the bright side, "it's going to be okay! i bet Swiftpaw is catching a squirrel now by Lionheart~"
"pack, pack, kill,kill" the she-cat continued in a ghostly way.
Cloudtail neared her ragged face covered in leaves and gasped. Leaving a shiver run down his spine. like it always did. "Brightpaw, come back to-"
"Pack, pack...Kill, kill"
"Brightpaw... Promise me you'll get better. And get back to hunting and fighting like the beautiful she-cat you are...."
For a second the she-cat seemed to feel a flicker of emotion. But it left and she went back to the same solemn words.}

Critique by ~FizzyWolf Jan 15, 2013, 6:24:14 AM

I dont see anything wrong with this picture. It is great, And I have read the Warriors series. The only thing I see wrong is Cloudpaw's\Tail's jaw. Where you curved it up, The jaw hangs open. You should of erased where you curved it up on the snout, over the jaw, And it would of looked perfect. Not trying to start an argument, or offend the artist, But, You dont have to change it, It's my opinion. Everyone has opinions! Don't change it just because I said something that you thought was offending, Please. It's your own picture. Thank you for reading this.

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Critique by ~Pollenstern Oct 6, 2012, 1:19:42 PM

Soo beautiful ist my favororit scene too and ist the wrong place Lostface lies next to Wieselpfote (sorry for German) but its sooo awesome the shading the pose al is sooo ... I dont know i cant finde words to diskribe that. I like the Eyey she look wery lost in her thoughts . And the littel forest pice i see ist soo fantastic the light and this all ist... Amazing
ANd two weeks are so many work
the fur looks like real fur and did i say i love this shadding
hope you draw more fantastik sceens from Warrior cats

GLG
Polle

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=shadow8919 4 days ago

for some random reason.. i always imagined cloudtail's with a high pitched voice... like a chipmunk's. xD anyways, i really like this.. it is AWESOME!! :3 ALSO, haters who don't like your photos, I HATE THEM! >